I think I’ve managed to get this to a point that I’ll dare post it. I’m not happy with it as a scene, but I think it’s just not something that fits in the story; the scene fits, but for the most part the tone doesn’t.
But it was interesting, and I’m loving getting back into this world. Over the last few years I’ve written squillions (maybe 50,000, but that feels like a lot) of words in this world from various people’s POVs. I’m thinking I’ll work in this world for NaNo and maybe come out of it with something akin to a novel draft.
So this scene is from Evie’s POV. The couple (Alayna and Michelle) are her flatmates (not friends), and Molly is their friend.
Keep Smiling 😀